1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-01-19 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Orchestra 내 용 Dear Diary, I was going to Orchestra with my friend. However, I had to stop for a year, because I didn't have any time to go. I wasn't able to blow well, because I stopped for too long time. When I went alot of new students were filling out the empty place of originl members who are friendly with me and played and led Orchestra for a long time. I was so surprised that there were only two original members. I expected a teacher who was teaching our orchestra, but teacher changed also. I didn't get use to do quickly, because, the style of a song was seriously lame. I really had a hard time blowing my instrument. You know, Trumpet is such a hard instrument to blow. So, I really had a pain on my lips. I thought It was going to be bleeding. I think My Orchestra team has been changing., and I think I like before style more than now. I hope I can meet my original members, and my old orchestra teacher and I hope we can create a new orchestrea and make jealous of orchestra where I'm going 답변자 tc0089 답변일 2012-01-26 답변내용 Thank you for your writing. My corrections for you... I was going to Orchestra with my friend. => I used to go to orchestra lessons with my friend. However, I had to stop for a year, because I didn't have any time to go. => However, I had to stop for a year, because I didn't have time to go. I wasn't able to blow well, because I stopped for too long time. => I wasn't able to blow well, because I stopped too long. When I went alot of new students were filling out the empty place of originl members. => When I went back, new students filled out the empty places of the original members. who are friendly with me and played and led Orchestra for a long time. (COMMENT: This sentence is too long so I cut it.) => They were friendly with me and led the Orchestra for a long time. I was so surprised that there were only two original members. => I was so surprised there were only two original members left. I expected a teacher who was teaching our orchestra, but teacher changed also. => I expected the same teacher, but the teacher was changed also. I didn't get use to do quickly, because, the style of a song was seriously lame. => I didn't get used to do my part quickly, because, the style of a song was seriously lame. So, I really had a pain on my lips. => So, I really had pain on my lips. I thought It was going to be bleeding. => I thought It was going to bleed. I think My Orchestra team has been changing., => I think My Orchestra team has changed. and I think I like before style more than now. => and I like the former style more than the present. I hope I can meet my original members, and my old orchestra teacher => I hope I can meet the original members, and my old orchestra teacher and I hope we can create a new orchestrea and make jealous of orchestra where I'm going => and I hope we can organize a new orchestra and make this new orchestra feel envious. Good writings Stiven. Take care and see you...^^