1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-01-30 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Konziam Resort 내 용 Dear, Diary I went to a ski resort name Konziam Reasort. I expected it to be fun. When I arrived, I went skiing at first, Konziam rsort had a lift card. I went the easiest course but i think I was too brave that Ijust went straight down to the end part.Unti the 2nd course I could just go straight down, but starting from the middle course, when I do that, I almost died. i couldn't control my speed even though there was a curve road. Fortunately, I was able to be alive, but I had a trrible accident. While I was coming down, I crashed with one border, my ski flew away and I flew 7m for 1 second, It was so scary. My friends were able to ride in the most difficult course, and I could also. I tried my best, and I passed that course without bumping with any other people. I was kind of proud of myself, but Unfortunately, I couldn't ride anymore because It was time to close the skicamp. So i and my friend went to dormitory,and I thinkI played game too much, I was plying with I pad, Nintendo, Phone and PSP. I was little bit tired because i did so alot of time and it was about 4am.So I slept really lateand I woke up really late. and When I woke up I watched Tv and played nintendo. Bye teacher and I hope you have a good day!,and Good luck!! 답변자 tc0089 답변일 2012-01-31 답변내용 Thank you for your writing. My few corrections for you... I went to a ski resort name Konziam Reasort. => I went to a ski resort named Konziam Reasort Konziam rsort had a lift card. => Konziam resort had a lift. Unti the 2nd course I could just go straight down, but starting from the middle course, when I do that, I almost died. => Until the 2nd course I could just go straight down,..... I tried my best, and I passed that course without bumping with any other people. => I tried my best, and I passed that course without bumping anyone. I couldn't ride anymore because It was time to close the skicamp. => I couldn't ride anymore because It was closing time. So i and my friend went to dormitory,and I thinkI played game too much, => So my friend and I went to the dormitory,and I think I played too much. I was plying with I pad, Nintendo, Phone and PSP. => I was playing with the I pad, Nintendo, Phone and PSP. I was little bit tired because i did so alot of time and it was about 4am. => I was little bit tired because i played a lot of times until it was about 4am. So I slept really lateand I woke up really late. => So I slept really late and woke up late. Gosh, that was some kind of vacation you had! You did the most of what you could because you won't be able to do that again until your next winter break! Take care and see you...^^