1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-02-02 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 cold day 내 용 Dear, Diary Today, I was feeling too cold, I don't know why but, It snowed two days before and temperature went down. It is exteremly cold that even though I wore two jackets, It's still seriously clod, I didn't know that there will be that much snow in the last day of the January, actually, It's should be the time peroid of getting cold. I really hate that kind of weather, because, it's stressful. Maybe it doesn't make sense for some people, but I need to go out and play, but I can't and don't want to play, because I need to get warm and whenever I go out, I feel lek I'm freezing. I really hate that, so I hope It will be warm as soon as it can be, and I'm really excited, because tommorow is Friday!!! Friday feels really good for me, because after 7.p.m, I t will be my free time to rest, and play for really long time. So, I hope to ride sled because ther had been snowing.I think I should go to sleep.Bye teacher and i hope you haing a good day. 답변자 tc0089 답변일 2012-02-07 답변내용 Thank you for your writing Stiven. My corrections for you... I didn't know that there will be that much snow in the last day of the January, actually, => I didn't know there will be much snowfall in the last days of January, actually. It's should be the time peroid of getting cold. => It should not be the period of getting cold. I feel lek I'm freezing. => I feel like I'm freezing. I really hate that, so I hope It will be warm as soon as it can be, => I really hate that, so I hope It will be warm soon. I t will be my free time to rest, and play for really long time. => It will be my time to rest and play for a really long time. So, I hope to ride sled because ther had been snowing. => So, I hope to ride the sled because it had been snowing. I hope you had fun playing with your sled. Take care and see you soon...^^