1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-02-13 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 soccer 내 용 Dear Diary, Today, I played soccer with my friends. I think I didn't have a chance to catch the ball, but whatever, I was goalkeeper. First, enemy team was winning, at firs, beacuse I couldn't protet one strong shoot. however my best friend scored. I was happy. I think It was sort of exciting. Because a lot of shoot has come to my team's goal.I could proet those, but my hand was so painful, and it bacame red. Fortunately, I was exchanged position with my freind. I was so happy. and I thought the game will be finished by tie, but I was so amazed that I scored one goal. I didn't expect actually. soI think I ahd such a exciting day today. I hope I can play socer with my friends several more times, because soccer is really exciting,and I can play with my friends.Bye teacher, I hope you have a good day. 답변자 tc0084 답변일 2012-02-13 답변내용 Today, I played soccer with my friends. => Correct sentence. I think I didn't have a chance to catch the ball, but whatever, I was goalkeeper. => I think I didn't have a chance to catch the ball, but whatever. I was the goalkeeper. First, enemy team was winning, at firs, beacuse I couldn't protet one strong shoot. => At first, the opponent team was winning because I couldn't protect a strong shot. however my best friend scored. => However, my best friend scored. I was happy. => Correct sentence. I think It was sort of exciting. Because a lot of shoot has come to my team's goal. => I think it was sort of exciting because a lot of the shots came from my team's goal. I could proet those, but my hand was so painful, and it bacame red. => I was able to protect those, but my hand was so painful and it became red. Fortunately, I was exchanged position with my freind. => Fortunately, I was exchanged positions with my friend. I was so happy. => Correct sentence. and I thought the game will be finished by tie, but I was so amazed that I scored one goal. => I thought the game will be finished with a tie, but I was so amazed when I scored one goal. I didn't expect actually. soI think I ahd such a exciting day today. => I didn't expect that actually, so I think I had such an exciting day today. I hope I can play socer with my friends several more times, because soccer is really exciting,and I can play with my friends. => I hope I can play soccer with my friends several more times, because soccer is really exciting, and I can hang out with my friends. Bye teacher, I hope you have a good day. => Correct! *^^*