1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-02-18 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Documentary 내 용 Dear Diary I watched the documentary name animal kingdom. I think It was talking about one bird who was living in the africa's east or south coast. They are eating sardin. i think It was pitiful that I should let those seals to eat cubs. I really hope that those birds can live well. In those coast, there arn't a lot of sardins or whatever it is, and if there is, they should be hrried because there are alot of rivals such as dolphins, sharks, seals and whales. But that was fine, at least they were full enough. I think the most terrible part was that seals eating the cubs, Seals attacked the cubs by force and When the cubs are hurt, the seals, they drown them and eat them. According to it, every 70% or 80% of cubs are being prey of seals. how terrible.I hope I can save them. but I think it was good chance for me to learn more about creatures which are living in the world. I hope I can watch it again so that I can have lessons about animals naturally by having fun. I hope every people will help those animals who are in danger, so that we can stop the extinction of animals which are important to our environment, the bye teacher and I hoe you have a great day!!! 답변자 tc0084 답변일 2012-02-20 답변내용 Dear Diary I watched the documentary name animal kingdom. => I watched a documentary entitled, "Animal Kingdom". I think It was talking about one bird who was living in the africa's east or south coast. => I think it was about a bird living in Africa's east or south coast. They are eating sardin. => They are eating sardines. i think It was pitiful that I should let those seals to eat cubs. => I think it was pitiful that I let those seals eat their cubs. I really hope that those birds can live well. => Correct sentence. In those coast, there arn't a lot of sardins or whatever it is, and if there is, they should be hrried because there are alot of rivals such as dolphins, sharks, seals and whales. => In those coasts, there aren't a lot of sardines or whatever. Or if there is, there are a lot of other rivals such as dolphins, sharks, seals, and whales. But that was fine, at least they were full enough. => Correct sentence. I think the most terrible part was that seals eating the cubs, => I think the most terrible part was that of the seals eating the cubs. Seals attacked the cubs by force and When the cubs are hurt, the seals, they drown them and eat them. => Seals attack the cubs by force and when the cubs are hurt, they drown and eat them. According to it, every 70% or 80% of cubs are being prey of seals. => According to the documentary, 70 to 80% of the cubs become prey for seals. how terrible. => How terrible! I hope I can save them. but I think it was good chance for me to learn more about creatures which are living in the world. => I hope I can save them, but I think it was a good chance for me to learn more about the creatures living in our world. I hope I can watch it again so that I can have lessons about animals naturally by having fun. => I hope I can watch it again so that I can have lessons about and have fun. I hope every people will help those animals who are in danger, so that we can stop the extinction of animals which are important to our environment, => I hope all people will help those animals in danger so we can stop the extinction of animals that are important to our environment. the bye teacher and I hoe you have a great day!!! => Bye, teacher. I hope you have a great day!!!