1 Autumn, relieving myself 2016-09-29 2 OIL 2016-05-03 3 The squrim of North Korea. What will be the result? 2016-03-22 4 Autumn; the season for students 2015-09-30 5 Sinju Singers Big Concert 2015-08-26 6 Economy Shaken by China's decrease 2015-08-24 7 North Korea's serious attack 2015-08-21 8 Humanity, the entrance of the peaceful life 2015-08-19 9 Abe's notorious behaviors 2015-08-14 10 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change 2015-08-07 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 현동준 작성일 2012-04-27 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Essay(Imagine that I am the adult and became an author) 내 용 (Race) The sky looked down at the race track of a small elementary school in the country side. The sun let out its warmth and tiny fragments of sand shined intermittently. I looked ahead and sayw a vast track in front of me. A crowd of people was staring at me, but I didn't know why. Far away, adn I started to run to her. Suddenly I hear a terrible cacophony of mocking laughter. Puzzled I tried to get closer to my teacher to be consoled, but she kept moving away from me. It really seemed as if I were to run forever. When I nearly reached the end of the rack, I stopped and started to cry. Once, when I was half as tall as I am now, I had participated in a race at a village festival. Even though I was too small to take part in athletic activities the townspeople urged me to race because I was the daughter of the only docotr in the village. So I was put on the track alone, with my teacher coaxing me to run. But before I finished my one-hundred meter race, I began to sob.When I was preparing for the standardized exams in high school. I often reacalled this bothersome episode from my childhood. As a child I had run to reach the one-hundred meter spot, a goal others had set for me. And because I did not have the will to reacg the end I gave up in the middle of the race. Sometimes, taking exam after exam, I felt the same helpness sometimes wish I could rest more, instead of constantly reading books about momentum and acceleration. Once, my advisor challenged my determination to graduate earlyy by asking me, "Why do you want to take the most rugged part to get into the college, when you could take an easier one?' I knew there was truth in his words. However, I declined to take the easier road, because I wanted to test how much I could do in two years. Struggling tp achieven waht Korea's best students had achieved in less time, I had tested my limits. And in my tight schedule I managed to take as many AP and SAT tests as our best seniors and still found time to participate in various theater competitions. I am still racing buit this time I can see where i am heading. And now, I have almost reached the end of the high school race track, which once seemed to be endless. Even though I have run hard towards this end, I do not fel exhausted. I am no longer a little child, whose finish line was set by others. 답변자 tc0119 답변일 2012-04-30 답변내용 (Race) The sky looked down at the race track of a small elementary school in the country side. >>Correct The sun let out its warmth and tiny fragments of sand shined intermittently. >> Correct I looked ahead and sayw a vast track in front of me. >>I looked ahead and said a vast track in front of me. A crowd of people was staring at me, but I didn't know why. >>Correct Far away, adn I started to run to her. Suddenly I hear a terrible cacophony of mocking laughter. >> Far away, I started to run to her. Suddenly I heard a terrible cacophony of mocking laughter. Puzzled I tried to get closer to my teacher to be consoled, but she kept moving away from me. >>Correct It really seemed as if I were to run forever. When I nearly reached the end of the rack, I stopped and started to cry. >>Correct Once, when I was half as tall as I am now, I had participated in a race at a village festival. >>Correct Even though I was too small to take part in athletic activities the townspeople urged me to race because I was the daughter of the only docotr in the village. >> Even though I was too small to take part in athletic activities the townspeople urged me to race because I was the daughter of the only doctor in the village. So I was put on the track alone, with my teacher coaxing me to run. >>Correct But before I finished my one-hundred meter race, I began to sob. >>Correct When I was preparing for the standardized exams in high school. >>Correct I often reacalled this bothersome episode from my childhood. >>Correct As a child I had run to reach the one-hundred meter spot, a goal others had set for me. >>Correct And because I did not have the will to reacg the end I gave up in the middle of the race. >> And because I did not have the will to reach the end I gave up in the middle of the race. Sometimes, taking exam after exam, I felt the same helpness sometimes wish I could rest more, instead of constantly reading books about momentum and acceleration. >>Correct Once, my advisor challenged my determination to graduate earlyy by asking me, "Why do you want to take the most rugged part to get into the college, when you could take an easier one?' >>Correct I knew there was truth in his words. However, I declined to take the easier road, because I wanted to test how much I could do in two years. >> I knew there was truth in his words. However, I declined to take the easier road, because I wanted to test how much I could do in two years. Struggling tp achieven waht Korea's best students had achieved in less time, I had tested my limits. And in my tight schedule I managed to take as many AP and SAT tests as our best seniors and still found time to participate in various theater competitions. >>And in my tight schedule I managed to take as many AP and SAT tests as our best seniors and still found time to participate in various theater competitions. I am still racing buit this time I can see where i am heading. >>Correct And now, I have almost reached the end of the high school race track, which once seemed to be endless. >>Correct Even though I have run hard towards this end, I do not fel exhausted. I am no longer a little child, whose finish line was set by others. >> Correct Dear Bill, Did you actually prepare it? Well, if you did. Job, well done! I didn't edit most of this work because they were done pretty well. =) Have a nice week. =)