1 Autumn, relieving myself 2016-09-29 2 OIL 2016-05-03 3 The squrim of North Korea. What will be the result? 2016-03-22 4 Autumn; the season for students 2015-09-30 5 Sinju Singers Big Concert 2015-08-26 6 Economy Shaken by China's decrease 2015-08-24 7 North Korea's serious attack 2015-08-21 8 Humanity, the entrance of the peaceful life 2015-08-19 9 Abe's notorious behaviors 2015-08-14 10 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change 2015-08-07 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 현동준 작성일 2012-07-09 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Essay 내 용 (Topic) What do you think about the economic trades. Economic trade means the helpful exchange that cause national developments. Now Korea is the world 7th strogest country. Even though it was very poor in past 1900s. The main source was the economic trades. Korea is located in 7th in trade part. We trade with more than 100 countries. IN the past in 1100s the Goruw(고려) was the world best trade center. Buck- Lan port that more than 20000 ships can move was the world biggest port at that time. China, Arabia traded with Goruw(고려) and Goruw(고려) became known as Korea because of Arabians. After the Korean war, the economy was built amazingly fast so only 50 years later after the Korean war the economic crisis became very high in Korea. Because of the efforts and helps from Grandpa, Grandmas we became the world best country anyway. 답변자 Eula 답변일 2012-07-10 답변내용 (Topic) What do you think about the economic trades. (Topic) What do you think about the economic trades? Economic trade means the helpful exchange that cause national developments. [good sentence] Now Korea is the world 7th strogest country. Now Korea is the [world's 7th strongest] country. Even though it was very poor in past 1900s. Even though it was very poor in [the 1900s]. The main source was the economic trades. [good sentence] Korea is located in 7th in trade part. Korea is considered to be the 7th best trading partner in the world. We trade with more than 100 countries. [good sentence] IN the past in 1100s the Goruw(고려) was the world best trade center. [In the 1100s], the Goruw(고려) was the [world's] best trade center. Buck- Lan port that more than 20000 ships can move was the world biggest port at that time. Buck-Lan port, the biggest port at that time, can accommodate more than 20000 ships. China, Arabia traded with Goruw(고려) and Goruw(고려) became known as Korea because of Arabians. China and Arabia traded with Goruw(고려) and it became known as Korea because [of the] Arabians. After the Korean war, the economy was built amazingly fast so only 50 years later after the Korean war the economic crisis became very high in Korea. After the Korean war, the [world economy developed] amazingly fast. So only 50 years [after the Korean war, the economic crisis reached it's peak] in Korea. Because of the efforts and helps from Grandpa, Grandmas we became the world best country anyway. Because of the efforts [and cooperation from our grandparents], we became [one the world's best countries] anyway. Note: 1. Be more careful with your word usage. 2. Continue working on your verb tenses.