1 Autumn, relieving myself 2016-09-29 2 OIL 2016-05-03 3 The squrim of North Korea. What will be the result? 2016-03-22 4 Autumn; the season for students 2015-09-30 5 Sinju Singers Big Concert 2015-08-26 6 Economy Shaken by China's decrease 2015-08-24 7 North Korea's serious attack 2015-08-21 8 Humanity, the entrance of the peaceful life 2015-08-19 9 Abe's notorious behaviors 2015-08-14 10 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change 2015-08-07 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 현동준 작성일 2012-07-14 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Essay 내 용 (The economy) Now a days Korea is the world best country. But 50years before Korea was the weakest country. During 50 years Korea's economy grew up very quickly but it had harmful sides too. After the Korean war the economy grew up because of our grandpa, grandma's mind. They thought if the economy become better Korea will be the strongest country in the globe. So they worked hard and they didn't change their minds before their dream become true. But it had harmful sides too. Their lifetime become shorter and now average Korean's age is only 77. Also the shortage of nation is the problem to keep Korea the best. 답변자 Eula 답변일 2012-07-16 답변내용 Now a days Korea is the world best country. [Nowadays, Korea is the world's] best country. But 50years before Korea was the weakest country. But [50 years] before Korea was the weakest country. During 50 years Korea's economy grew up very quickly but it had harmful sides too. [For 50 years, Korea's economy developed quickly but it had harmful effects] too. After the Korean war the economy grew up because of our grandpa, grandma's mind. [After the Korean war, the economy improved because of our grandparents' way of thinking.] They thought if the economy become better Korea will be the strongest country in the globe. They thought if the economy [becomes better, Korea will be the strongest country in the globe.] So they worked hard and they didn't change their minds before their dream become true. So they worked hard and they didn't change their minds [until their dream came true.] But it had harmful sides too. But it had harmful [effects] too. Their lifetime become shorter and now average Korean's age is only 77. Their lifetime become shorter and now [an average Korean lives until 77 years old.] Also the shortage of nation is the problem to keep Korea the best. [I don't think I understand what you are trying to say here] Notes: 1. Try to make use of appropriate words. 2. Take note of proper spacing.