1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-07-24 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Concentrate 내 용 Nowadays my mom is saying to me that I need to concntrate. I really think too. I'm always sleeping lately because I don't concentrate. My mother said, just do it fast and play, but It was pretty hard. I don't know why, but it takes too long time for me to finish one thing. I think it is one of my bad thing also. I should be very depressed. One way to fix it is just to concentrate in my work very weel. I hope to do that because, it will make me to get much better scores in my 2nd semester i my school and I can now can be playing freely. I'm so sad.I hope to concentrate on my work very well, and get good scores. 답변자 tc0084 답변일 2012-07-25 답변내용 Nowadays my mom is saying to me that I need to concntrate. => Nowadays, my mom is telling to me that I need to concntrate. I really think too. => I really think, too. I'm always sleeping lately because I don't concentrate. => I'm always sleeping late because I don't concentrate. My mother said, just do it fast and play, but It was pretty hard. => My mother said, "Just do it fast and then play", but it was pretty hard. I don't know why, but it takes too long time for me to finish one thing. => I don't know why, but it takes a long time for me to finish one thing. I think it is one of my bad thing also. => I think it is one of the bad things about me. I should be very depressed. => Correct sentence. One way to fix it is just to concentrate in my work very weel. => One way to fix it is just to concentrate in my work very well. I hope to do that because, it will make me to get much better scores in my 2nd semester i my school => I hope to do that because it will make me get better scores in my 2nd semester in school. and I can now can be playing freely. => And now, I can play freely. I'm so sad. => Correct sentence. I hope to concentrate on my work very well, and get good scores. => Correct sentence.