1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-07-27 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Dad 내 용 My father is just normal businessman. He works at just normal company which is caring about the land and house in korea. He is in pretty high level, because, he satyed their for long time. That's why I think I can't see him that often. I'm kind of bored. But I understand him because He is busy for work and promses, but he still drinks a lot of alchohol, but it is still better than cigarretes,and he cut the cigarretes. I think I should e proud of my father because he was even in the newspaper, and he provides almosteveryting to me. I think I can do whatI'm dong because of him. I think I'm very proud of him. I should be thankful. But there is alot bad thing about my father also. he always cone home late and during weekends. I hope that he will be more parental to our family. However, as all children does, i love my father either. That's why my father says to me that I should take care of him when I grow up. I think I realy should for bothmy parents. I owed them so much.Thank you, father! 답변자 tc0084 답변일 2012-07-30 답변내용 My father is just normal businessman. => My father is just a normal businessman. He works at just normal company which is caring about the land and house in korea. => He works at a company that cares for land and houses in Korea. He is in pretty high level, because, he satyed their for long time. => He is in a pretty high position because he has stayed there for a long time. That's why I think I can't see him that often. => Correct sentence. I'm kind of bored. => Correct sentence. But I understand him because He is busy for work and promses, => But I understand him because he is busy at work. but he still drinks a lot of alchohol, but it is still better than cigarretes,and he cut the cigarretes. => He still drinks a lot of alcohol, but that's better than cigarettes. He had cut back on cigarettes. I think I should e proud of my father because he was even in the newspaper, and he provides almosteveryting to me. => I think I should be proud of my father because he was even in the newspaper, and he provides almost everything for me. I think I can do whatI'm dong because of him. => I think I can do what I'm doing because of him. I think I'm very proud of him. => Correct sentence. I should be thankful. => Correct sentence. But there is alot bad thing about my father also. => But there are a lot of bad things about my father, too. he always cone home late and during weekends. => He always comes home late even on weekends. I hope that he will be more parental to our family. => I hope that he will be more of a parent to our family. However, as all children does, i love my father either. => However, as all children do, I still love my father. That's why my father says to me that I should take care of him when I grow up. => That's why my father tells me that I should take care of him when I grow up. I think I realy should for bothmy parents. => I think I should really care for both of my parents. I owed them so much. => Correct sentence. Thank you, father! => Correct sentence.