1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-08-15 Weather    Feeling  Happy 제 목 My brother is come! 내 용 My brother is come from the camp. A 2o'clock,my brother is come home!!!!! Me,my mom,and my dad is haveing a questions In the camp, my brother is make a ball, but it broken. It was the nice ball. I was so happy. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-08-17 답변내용 My brother is come from the camp. >> My brother came back from the camp. (verb tense and missing word) A 2o'clock,my brother is come home!!!!! Me,my mom,and my dad is haveing a questions >> My brother came home at around 2 o'clock. My mom, my dad and I asked a lot of questions. (better expression and syntax) In the camp, my brother is make a ball, but it broken. It was the nice ball. I was so happy. >> In the camp, my brother made a ball but it was broken. It was a nice ball. I was so happy. (verb tense and missing article) ================================================================================================================================ Hi, Happy Friday! Thank you for writing in your diary! Enjoy your wekekend with your family! Teacher Erin