1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-08-17 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 I Made A Plane!!!!! 내 용 I made a plane by myself. It look very good! Maybe it will 30cm.It have gun too! It is slow, but fly very long. It name is STRPLANE1. Str meen straw, and plane meen plane. This is made of straw. But, it is not just plane. It is a fighting plane. I like this fighting plane. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-08-20 답변내용 I made a plane by myself. >> no correction It look very good! >> It looks very good. (subject-verb agreement) Maybe it will 30cm.It have gun too! >> Maybe it is about 30cm long. It has a gun too. (subject-verb agreement) It is slow, but fly very long. It name is STRPLANE1. >> It is slow but it can fly for a long time. Its name is STRPLANE1. (better expression) Str meen straw, and plane meen plane. This is made of straw. But, it is not just plane. It is a fighting plane. I like this fighting plane. >> Str means straw, and plane means plane. This is made of straw. But, it is not just a plane. It is a fighting plane. I like this fighting plane. (subject-verb agreement) =-=========================================================================================================================== Hi, Wow! You are amazing! I think you can be a plane mechanic or inventor someday! You are so creative! Good job! Teacher Erin