1 Autumn, relieving myself 2016-09-29 2 OIL 2016-05-03 3 The squrim of North Korea. What will be the result? 2016-03-22 4 Autumn; the season for students 2015-09-30 5 Sinju Singers Big Concert 2015-08-26 6 Economy Shaken by China's decrease 2015-08-24 7 North Korea's serious attack 2015-08-21 8 Humanity, the entrance of the peaceful life 2015-08-19 9 Abe's notorious behaviors 2015-08-14 10 United Nations Framework Convention on Climate Change 2015-08-07 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 현동준 작성일 2012-09-05 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Summary 내 용 Today's article is talking about Park Ji Sung who is playing in Queens park rangers. There are four paragraphs. First and Second is talking about his career and the life in Queens park rangers. Also third and fourth paragraph is talking about the result of the match with swansi city and other players in Premier league. It is very important thing to be the best soccer player is passionce I believe he will have paitience of the teemates. 답변자 tc0102 답변일 2012-09-07 답변내용 Today's article is talking about Park Ji Sung who is playing in Queens park rangers. >>The article for today is about Park Ji Sung who is playing in Queens Park Rangers. There are four paragraphs. >>no correction First and Second is talking about his career and the life in Queens park rangers. >>The first and second paragraphs talk about his career and life in Queens Park Rangers. Also third and fourth paragraph is talking about the result of the match with swansi city and other players in Premier league. >>On the other hand, the third and fourth paragraphs talk about the result of the match with Swansea city and other players in Premier league. It is very important thing to be the best soccer player is passionce I believe he will have paitience of the teemates. >>It is very important thing to be passionate when you are a soccer player; I believe he have patience with his teammates.