1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-10-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 I Plane Auto-Mata!!!!!!!!!!!! 내 용 In after school,I made a Auto-Mata. It is a plane Auto-Mata!!! I made Auto-Mata in 45 minute. The plane is a biplane. It is just a biplane, it look very,very good!!!!!!! If the handle is turn, the plane is up and down. And the specill is I made small people, and I put the people in the plane! It is made of paper. But, it is stong. So, it is not broke. I am very,very,very happy. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-10-15 답변내용 In after school,I made a Auto-Mata. It is a plane Auto-Mata!!! >> Afte school, I made an "Auto-Mata". It is a plane. (better expression and proper article) I made Auto-Mata in 45 minute. The plane is a biplane. >> It took me 45 minutes to make it. It is a biplane. (better expression) It is just a biplane, it look very,very good!!!!!!! >> It is just a biplane but it looks really good! (missing preposition) If the handle is turn, the plane is up and down. >> If you turn the handle, the plane goes upside down! (better expression) And the specill is I made small people, and I put the people in the plane! >> To make it more special, I made some small people and I put them inside the plane! (better expression) It is made of paper. >> no correction But, it is stong. So, it is not broke. >> But, it is strong. So, it doesn't broke. (proper verb) I am very,very,very happy. >> no correction ================================================================================================================================ Hi, I think you are very creative! I really admire you for that! Keep on building different things. :) Teacher Erin