1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-10-15 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Self Examination 내 용 Dear Diary, Today I had to leave in school until 5:00P.M. because I made a big noise. I got a lot of screamig from my teacher. I was really upset. i hoped it not to be happened any more. When it was art class, some body threw a ciolorpencil pn me so I picked up iy, and threw again to that and it hit my art class pI had to go tpand teacher really screamed loud to me. I was kind of afriad, but I deided to not do those kin of actions. I hope she 't think about good memory. I should not have made suxh a big mistake. Whatever, a person who threw a colorpencil to me I really fell zorry about that. also got punoshed. I hopethat I won't be trouble maker in my class. and I won't try to be. I really think that I shodl have fine xchoollife, not more trouble maker. I really hope to them to be happende and I will have very succesful life and I might be a rich someday and be proud of myself. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2012-10-16 답변내용 Dear Diary, Today I had to leave in school until 5:00P.M. because I made a big noise. [Today,] I had to [stay] in school until [5:00 p.m.] because I made a big noise. I got a lot of screamig from my teacher. I got a lot of [screaming] from my teacher. I was really upset. [Correct!] i hoped it not to be happened any more. [I hope] it [won't happen anymore.] When it was art class, some body threw a ciolorpencil pn me so I picked up iy, and threw again to that and it hit my art class When it was art class, [somebody] threw a [color pencil on] me so I picked [it up] and threw [it back] and it hit my [classmate.] pI had to go tpand teacher really screamed loud to me. [I] had to [stand up and the] teacher screamed [loudly at me.] I was kind of afriad, but I deided to not do those kin of actions. I was kind of [afraid,] but I [decided not to] do those [kind] of actions [again.] I hope she 't think about good memory. I hope she [will only think of] good [memories.] I should not have made suxh a big mistake. I should [have not] made [such] a big mistake. Whatever, a person who threw a colorpencil to me I really fell zorry about that.also got punoshed. [The] person who threw [the color pencil on me also got punished and I really feel sorry about that.] I hopethat I won't be trouble maker in my class. and I won't try to be. I hope [that] I won't be a [troublemaker] in my class and I [will try not] to be. I really think that I shodl have fine xchoollife, not more trouble maker. I really think that I [should] have a fine [school life and not to be a troublemaker.] I really hope to them to be happende and I will have very succesful life and I might be a rich someday and be proud of myself. I really hope [that] I will have [a] very successful life [and be] rich someday [so I'll] be proud of myself. Note: 1. Please double-check your spelling. Hi Stiven! You really got in big trouble in school. But I'm glad to know that you reflected your actions. I hope you'll be very successful in the future. ^^ - Teacher Tracy