1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-10-24 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 My home animal 내 용 I will tell you about a my house's animal. No.1. crayfish. The start is Chungcheongnam-do mountain. I eeds them one week. They eat a litte fish. They eat frog too! First, they are 7, but 3dead, so, I have 4crayfish. It is very cute! So, in my house,I have fish. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-10-25 답변내용 I will tell you about a my house's animal. >> I will tell you about my animals at home. (word form) No.1. crayfish. >> The first one is a crayfish. (better expression) The start is Chungcheongnam-do mountain. >> I got it from Chungcheongnam-do mountain. (better expression) I eeds them one week. >> I feed them once in a week. (better expression) They eat a litte fish. >> They eat little fish. (misuse of article) They eat frog too! >> They eat frogs too! (pluralization) First, they are 7, but 3dead, so, I have 4crayfish. >> First, they were 7, but 3 of them died. So, I only have four left. (better expression) It is very cute! >> no correction So, in my house,I have fish. >> So, I have fish athome. (better expression) ================================================================================================================================== Hi, Thank you for sharing something about your pet! :) Teacher Erin