1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-10-29 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Audl R8 내 용 I have R/C car. It is Audl R8. It is not fast, but I like it. It color is Black and Silver. And it is Hybrid. My brother is Ferrari 458 Spyder. My brother is faster then me, but in corner, I use drift. So, I won. I like my R/C car. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-10-31 답변내용 I have R/C car. >> no correction It is Audl R8. >> It is an Audi R8. (missing article) It is not fast, but I like it. >> no correction It color is Black and Silver. >> It is color black and silver. (syntax) And it is Hybrid. >> And, it is a hybrid. (missing article and punctuation) My brother is Ferrari 458 Spyder. >> My brother has a Ferrari 458 Spyder. (proper verb) My brother is faster then me, but in corner, I use drift. >> My brother's car is faster than mine, but when both cars reached the corner, mine drifted. (proper pronoun) So, I won. >> no correction I like my R/C car. >> no correction ============================================================================================================================== HI, I also like cars. Although, I don't know much about them. But, I personally prefer vintage cars. :) Teacher Erin