1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2012-10-23 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 soccer game 내 용 Today i had a one of th most terrible soccer game in my life. I fet seriously sad. I thought our team almost win, but could not win, because of a person who told a lie. It was very important game for my team. If our team lose, our team will be failed, because it was a tournament. Our team's stricker scored first and feeling was our's. but when other team had a drawing, a strong boy threw it and it flw away by everyone's heigh. but one boy told a lie that it touched his head and judge was playing and couldn't see. So our team said he is lying, but judge said shut up and it was finished. and finally, our team lost. some of my friends cried. how said. I wanted to kill the boy. because he was screaming and being happy. How stressful. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2012-10-30 답변내용 Today i had a one of th most terrible soccer game in my life. Today [I] had [one of the] most terrible soccer game in my life. I fet seriously sad. [Correct!] I thought our team almost win, but could not win, because of a person who told a lie. I thought our team [would win. But we didn't win] because of a person who told a lie. It was very important game for my team. It was [a] very important game for my team. If our team lose, our team will be failed, because it was a tournament. If our team [loses,] our team will be [out] because [it's] a tournament. Our team's stricker scored first and feeling was our's. Our team's [striker] scored first and [the] feeling was [good.] but when other team had a drawing, a strong boy threw it and it flw away by everyone's heigh. [But when the] other team had a drawing. a strong boy thew it and it [went very far away.] *I don't understand what you meant by "drawing". but one boy told a lie that it touched his head and judge was playing and couldn't see. [But a] boy told a lie [and said that] it touched his head. [The referee] was playing and [didn't see it.] So our team said he is lying, but judge said shut up and it was finished. So our team said he [was] lying. [But the referee told us to] shut up and it was finished. and finally, our team lost. some of my friends cried. [So our] team lost. [Some] of my friends cried. how said. [How sad.] I wanted to kill the boy. [Correct!] because he was screaming and being happy. [Because] he was screaming and [happy.] How stressful. How [stressful!] Note: 1. Please observe proper word choices. 2. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 3. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! I'm sorry to hear about what happened to your soccer game. I hope the next game will favor you team. Fighting! ^^ - Teacher Tracy