1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-11-02 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 My Familly 내 용 I will tell you about my familly. My father: He's name is hyung min kim. He is 42 year's old and his birthday is april 18. My mother: He's name is dae hee kim. She is 39 year's old and her birthday is october 22. My brother: He's name is chan ho kim. He is 11 year's old and his birthday is april 14. Me: My name is won ho kim. I am 9 year's old and my birthday is january 30. I love my familly. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-11-06 답변내용 I will tell you about my familly. >> no correction My father: He's name is hyung min kim. >> My father's name is Hyung Min Kim. (better expression) He is 42 year's old and his birthday is april 18. >> He is 42 year's old and his birthday is on April 18. (capitalization of the proper noun) My mother: He's name is dae hee kim. >> My mother's name is Dae Hee Kim. (better expression) She is 39 year's old and her birthday is october 22. >> She is 39 year's old and her birthday is on October 22. (capitalization of the proper noun) My brother: He's name is chan ho kim. >> My brother's name is Chan Ho Kim. (better expression) He is 11 year's old and his birthday is april 14. >> He is 11 year's old and his birthday is on April 14. (capitalization of the proper noun) Me: My name is won ho kim. >> My name is Won Ho Kim. (capitalization of the proper noun) I am 9 year's old and my birthday is january 30. >> I am 9 year's old and my birthday is on January 30. (capitalization of the proper noun) I love my familly. >> no correction