1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-11-07 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Please fo teacher 내 용 VERY VERY please to teacher. 1.Hurry to read a diary Becauce I wont to hurry have comment. 2. Let's talk about subject first,and talk about me. Becauce I want to talk about subject, not me. 3.No Becauce NO(I'mj***k***** you) Then BYE BYE! 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-11-08 답변내용 VERY VERY please to teacher. >> To teacher, 1.Hurry to read a diary >> 1. Please read my diary immediately. (better expression) Becauce I wont to hurry have comment. >> It is because I want to see your comments immediately. (better expression) 2. Let's talk about subject first,and talk about me. 2. Let's talk about the subject first,and talk about me. (missing article) Becauce I want to talk about subject, not me. >> It is because I want to talk about the subject and not me. (complete thought) 3.No >> 3. No. (missing punctuation) Becauce NO(I'mj***k***** you) >> (This sentence has no meaning so you can just remove it.) Then BYE BYE! >> Bye! (unnecessary word) ================================================================================================================================== Thank you for these suggestions. These comments have been noted. :) Teacher Erin