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I like Psy. Because he is a very good singer. He's famous song is Gangnam style, Korea, Champion, and father and other many song. Korea is sing when London Olympics. It is famous too. But most famous is!!! GANGNAM STYLE!!! I like Gangnam Style very much. I like Psy very much.
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I like Psy. >> no correction Because he is a very good singer. >> It is because he is a very good singer. (complete thought) He's famous song is Gangnam style, Korea, Champion, and father and other many song. >> Some of his famous songs are Gangnam Style, Korea, Champion and Father. (syntax) Korea is sing when London Olympics. >> Korea was played during the London Olympics. (word choice) It is famous too. >> no correction But most famous is!!! GANGNAM STYLE!!! >> But, the most famous is "Gangnam Style". (missing article) I like Gangnam Style very much. >> no correction I like Psy very much. >> no correction ============================================================================================================================= Hi, I checked this diary today, November 12, 2012. Monday. This is because we don't go to work on weekends. So, I can't check your diary on those days. :) Anyway, if you do have questions, just feel free to ask. :) Teacher Erin