1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-11-12 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 I got chickenpox................... 내 용 Chickenpox is scary disease. I got chickenpox. Every people got chickenpox. It is itchy, but if you has a scratch, then it has a scar. It look like holl. So it is look like mars. Pink lotion is good for chikenpox. I will beat the chikenpox. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-11-13 답변내용 Chickenpox is scary disease. >> Chickenpox is a scary disease. (missing article) I got chickenpox. >> no correction Every people got chickenpox. >> Every person will experience having a chickenpox once in their life. (better expression) It is itchy, but if you has a scratch, then it has a scar. >> It is itchy but if you scratch it, it would leave a scar. (better expression) It look like holl. >> It looks like a hole. (misspelled word) So it is look like mars. >> So, it looks like Mars. (subject-verb agreement) Pink lotion is good for chikenpox. >> no correction I will beat the chikenpox. >> no correction ================================================================================================================================= Hi, I also had a chickenpox when I was young. Well, you have to be really careful because that disease is contagious so9 you can easily pass that to other people. Anyway, take a lot of vitamin C because it helps to quickly heal the wounds. :) Teacher Erin