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I like battle robot much. I see the battle robot 20. It look like real steel(It is robot boxing movie)robot. I will tell mum for buy Christmas. If i buy it, I will made sandback. And I will control the robot. So, the robot will hit the sandback. The robot is very interesting.
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I like battle robot much. >> I really like battle robots. (syntax) I see the battle robot 20. >> I saw the Battle Robot 20. (capitalization) It look like real steel(It is robot boxing movie)robot. >> It looked like Reel Steel.(It is a robot boxing movie.) (misspelled word) I will tell mum for buy Christmas. >> I will tell my mom to buy it for Christmas. (misspelled word) If i buy it, I will made sandback. >> If I buy it, I will make a sandbag. (misspelled word) And I will control the robot. >> And, I will control the robot. (missing article) So, the robot will hit the sandback. >> So, the robot will hit the sandbag. (misspelled word) The robot is very interesting. >> no correction ========================================================================================================================== Hi, I think you really like robots. :) I hope you can really have that for Christmas. :) Teacher Erin