1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-11-23 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 About Me 내 용 To.Everyone Hi, My name is Wonhokim. I'm 9 years old and I want to Sindorim Elementary School. My english name is beetle. I like robot, animal and many other thing. Also, I like fighting too. Then good bye! From. wonho So, It is about me. And teacher, now don't talk about me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-11-26 답변내용 To.Everyone >> To: Everyone (punctuation) Hi, My name is Wonhokim. >> Hi! My name is Won-ho Kim. (capitalization of the proper name) I'm 9 years old and I want to Sindorim Elementary School. >> I'm 9 years old and I am studying at Sindorim Elementary School. (better expression) My english name is beetle. >> My english name is "Beetle". (capitalization of proper noun) I like robot, animal and many other thing. >> I like robots, animals and many other things. (pluralization) Also, I like fighting too. >> Also, I like fighting. (redundancy: "ALSO" and "TOO" have the same meaning) Then good bye! >> Goodbye! (capitalization) So, It is about me. >> So, this is about myself. (better expression) And teacher, now don't talk about me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> Teacher, don't talk about me! (better expression) From. wonho >> From: Wonho (capitalization) ================================================================================================================================= Hi Beetle, Thank you for sharing things about yourself. Anyway, have a great Monday! Teacher Erin