1 We must turn off the lights to protect the energy. 2013-05-17 2 Go to the other country. 2013-01-24 3 The soccer time leader 2013-01-23 4 The movie. 2013-01-22 5 The wooden subway! 2013-01-13 6 The little boys modeling!!! 2013-01-10 7 What do you think about sigle term system? 2013-01-03 8 The naver and the happy bean site. 2013-01-02 9 A new year!!!! 2013-01-01 10 The holiday!!!!!!! 2012-12-24 1 2 3   회 원 이상기 작성일 2012-11-25 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Smartphone is attaking us! 내 용 It is very dangerous that students use a smartphone. By smartphone, we can play games and chat with other people. When we chat or play games once, we cannot stop it. So, we can't concentrate on studying. Besides, smartphone also has good points too. We can comunnicate with each other by social network and chatting. So, we must know both sides and use it wisely. My mother doesn't allow me to have a smartphone. But, I still wnat to get it eagerly! 답변자 tc0056 답변일 2012-11-26 답변내용 Hi Bryan! Here are the corrections; It is very dangerous that students use a smartphone. By smartphone, we can play games and chat with other people. >> It is very dangerous for students to use smartphones.Through smartphone, we can play games and chat with other people. When we chat or play games once, we cannot stop it. So, we can't concentrate on studying. >> When we begin playing games or chatting through it, we could hardly stop it. So, we can't concentrate on studying. Besides, smartphone also has good points too. We can comunnicate with each other by social network and chatting. > On the other hand, smartphone has also advantages. We can comunnicate with each other through social networking sites . So, we must know both sides and use it wisely. >> So, we must know both sides and use it wisely. My mother doesn't allow me to have a smartphone. But, I still wnat to get it eagerly! >> My mother doesn't allow me to have a smartphone. But, I am still eager to have it.