1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-11-28 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Magnet soccer 내 용 In my house, there are many magnet. So, I will made a magnet soccer. This is a team. Team1:FC WONHO Team2:CHAN I-PARK Team3:HYONG United Team4:MEAN BUK 1is me, 2is my brother. 3is my father, 4is my friend. I think I will win. Hurry to have magent soccer. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-11-29 답변내용 In my house, there are many magnet. >> In my house, there are many magnets. (pluralization) So, I will made a magnet soccer. >> So, I will make a magnet soccer. (verb form) This is a team. >> This is the team. (proper article) Team1:FC WONHO >> no correction Team2:CHAN I-PARK >> no correction Team3:HYONG United >> no correction Team4:MEAN BUK >> no correction 1is me, 2is my brother. >> I'm the 1st player and my brother is the second player. (better expression) 3is my father, 4is my friend. >> My father is the 3rd player and my friend is the 4th player. (better expression) I think I will win. >> no correction Hurry to have magent soccer. >> I' in a hurry to have the magnet soccer. (better expression) ============================================================================================================================== Hi, I think this is going to be a really exciting soccer match. :) Teacher Erin