1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-12-03 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 MY CHRISTMAS PRESENT 내 용 I like christmas. Becauce I like present. I want Battle robot 20. If I buy it, I will traning. And make him stonger. It color is black, and lttle green. It is like people have a boxing. The great boxer is Tyson, Muhammad Ali, Jack Dempsey and many other many people. I like CHRISTMAS. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-12-04 답변내용 I like christmas. >> I like Christmas. (capitalization) Becauce I like present. >> I like receiving presents. (better expression) I want Battle robot 20. >> I want to have the "Battle Robot 20". (better expression) If I buy it, I will traning. >> If I buy it, I will undergo training. (word form) And make him stonger. >> And, I will make him stronger. (better expression) It color is black, and lttle green. >> It is color black and green. (syntax) It is like people have a boxing. >> It is like a human boxer. (better expression) The great boxer is Tyson, Muhammad Ali, Jack Dempsey and many other many people. >> Some of the great boxers are Tyson, Muhammad Ali, Jack Dempsey and many others. (better expression) I like CHRISTMAS. >> no correction ============================================================================================================================= Hi Beetle, Thank you for making this diary! :) Teacher Erin