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We must turn off the lights to protect the energy.
2013-05-17
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Go to the other country.
2013-01-24
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The soccer time leader
2013-01-23
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The movie.
2013-01-22
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The wooden subway!
2013-01-13
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The little boys modeling!!!
2013-01-10
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What do you think about sigle term system?
2013-01-03
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The naver and the happy bean site.
2013-01-02
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A new year!!!!
2013-01-01
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The holiday!!!!!!!
2012-12-24
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2012-12-06
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Today I learn about animal beavers. So I wright about beavers. besvers have an theath that never stop growing. So it must chewing the wood or gnaw a hard things. When I was 7years old I don't has any room. So I made my room in the living rooom or in sisters bed room. At last she angry to me so iI made my room under the piano! (I thought that room is very smaller than other provious my rooms. hahaha~)So my mom said I am a beaver.
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Hi Bryan! Here are the corrections; Today I learn about animal beavers. >> No error So I wright about beavers. besvers have an theath that never stop growing. >> So I wright about beavers. Beavers have teeth that never stop growing. So it must chewing the wood or gnaw a hard things. >> Hence, it could chew wood and even gnaw hard things. When I was 7years old I don't has any room. So I made my room in the living rooom or in sisters bed room. >> When I was 7 years old, I didn't have any room. So I used to sleep at the living rooom or in my sister's bed room. At last she angry to me so iI made my room under the piano! (I thought that room is very smaller than other provious my rooms. hahaha~)So my mom said I am a beaver. >> As I continued to sleep in her room, she got mad at me then I decided to sleep underneath the piano! (I thought her room was smaller than other rooms. hahaha~)From that day on, my mom called me a Beaver.