1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-12-14 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 AK-47 내 용 I have mini AK-47. It is a strongest rifle in the world. But it is a mini gun. And it is hard to shoot, and it is so hurt. It is enemy of M-16. Becauce M-16 is made from USA. But, Ak-47 is made from Russia. And M-16 and AK-47 is stongest rifle. So, it is enemy. But, I like all gun. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-12-17 답변내용 I have mini AK-47. >> I have a mini AK-47. (missing article) It is a strongest rifle in the world. >> It is the strongest rifle in the world. (proper article) But it is a mini gun. >> But, it is just a mini gun. (missing word, article and punctuation) And it is hard to shoot, and it is so hurt. >> And, it is hard to shoot, and it is so painful. (word choice) It is enemy of M-16. >> It is the enemy of M-16. (missing article) Becauce M-16 is made from USA. >> It is becauce M-16 is made from USA. (complete thought) But, Ak-47 is made from Russia. >> no correction And M-16 and AK-47 is stongest rifle. >> M-16 and AK-47 are stongest rifles. (subject-verb agreement) So, it is enemy. >> So, they are enemies. (proper pronoun) But, I like all gun. >> But, I like all guns. (pluralization) =============================================================================================================================== Hi, You did a good job! But, practice using articles. :) Teacher Erin