1 Powder toy’s powerful bomb 2016-03-14 2 Powder toy’s community(1) 2016-02-29 3 Powder toy’s crane(1) 2016-02-23 4 Powder toy’s elevator(4) 2016-02-22 5 Powder toy’s elevator(3) 2016-02-19 6 Powder toy’s elevator(2) 2016-02-18 7 Powder toy’s elevator making(1) 2016-02-11 8 Powder toy’s idea(7) 2016-01-28 9 Powder city’s idea(6) 2016-01-22 10 IoT 2016-01-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 김원호 작성일 2012-12-17 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Long Lasting Bread 내 용 How does the bread don't bad in 60? It is a microwave. Microwave is like laser. It is warm for food so we can eat them. That is so fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But microwave is bad for people. (ㅠㅠ) Becauce, micro is not good people. If people wloud exposure micro, it will hurt. So, it is bad for people. But bread is delicious. 답변자 tc0072 답변일 2012-12-18 답변내용 How does the bread don't bad in 60? >> How does the bread stay fresh in 60 days? (better expression) It is a microwave. >> It is because of the microwave. (missing article) Microwave is like laser. >> no correction It is warm for food so we can eat them. >> It warms that food so we can eat them. (better expression) That is so fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> no correction But microwave is bad for people. (ㅠㅠ) >> But, microwave is bad for people. (ㅠㅠ) (missing punctuation) Becauce, micro is not good people. >> Because, micro is not good for people. (misspelled word and missing word) If people wloud exposure micro, it will hurt. >> If people would be exposed to micro, they would get sick. (better expression) So, it is bad for people. >> no correction But bread is delicious. >> But, bread is delicious. (Missing punctuation) ================================================================================================================================ Hi, I agree with you. I think bread is really yummy. :) I love eating bread while drinking coffee. Teacher Erin