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Today was a president election.I hope Park keun hae won't be a president. I think she is popular, but not prepared for president. I hope a lot of people will vote, so Moon Jae In will win. I hope Moon Jae Inwill become a president. I really hope so. ut for moon's win, a lot of people should vote or him. I think vot eis the flower of democrac. So, If they want to make our society to democratic, we should vote. Of couse I can't vote but.
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Today was a president election. Today was [the presidential] election. I hope Park keun hae won't be a president. I hope Park [Keun Hae] won't be [the] president. I think she is popular, but not prepared for president. I think she is [popular. But she's not yet] prepared [to be the] president. I hope a lot of people will vote, so Moon Jae In will win. I hope a lot of people [would vote for] Moon Jae In [so he could] win. I hope Moon Jae Inwill become a president. I hope Moon Jae [In will] become [the] president. I really hope so. [Correct!] ut for moon's win, a lot of people should vote or him. [But] for [him to] win, a lot of people should vote [for] him. I think vot eis the flower of democrac. I think [being able to vote is] the [power] of [democracy.] So, If they want to make our society to democratic, we should vote. [So] if they want to make our society to [be] democratic, we should vote. Of couse I can't vote but. [But] I can't vote [yet.] Note: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Please focus on the proper use of articles and prepositions. Hi Stiven! Did your parents vote today? I hope Koreans voted wisely this time. We're going to talk about this later in our class. Thanks for sharing! ^^ - Teacher Tracy