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In February seventh, in my class... >> My class will be on the 7th of February. (better expression) THERE IS A SCHOOL PLAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >> no correction I want to sing. >> no correction So, Sing1.Gangnam Style >>> So, I'm gonna sing "Gangnam Style". (better expression) Oppa is Gangnam style >> no correction Gangnam Style >> no correction A girl who is warm and humanle during the day >> A girl who is warm and humane during the day (misspell word) A classy girl who know how to enjoy the freedom of a cup of coffee >> A classy girl who knows how to enjoy the freedom of a cup of coffee, (subject-verb agreement) A girl whose heart gets hotter when night comes >> no correction A girl with that kind of twist >> no correction Like this(But not english). >> I'm gonna sing like this (but not in English). (complete thought) Sing2.Lemon Tree >> Song # 2: Lemon Tree (word choice) I'm sitting here in the boring room. >> no correction It's just another raining sunday afternoon. >> It's just another rainy sunday afternoon. (word form) I'm wasting my time in the noting to do. >> I'm wasting my time. I got nothing to do. (misspelled word) I'm hanging around and waiting for you. >> no correction Like this(It is english song.). >> I like this. It is an English song.(punctuation) I like school play. >> no correction I'm hanging around >> no correction