1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-01-01 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Happy New Year 내 용 Today wa New year's day and I feel seriously good. I played a lot. First, I watched a movie named Tower. It was really funny. I thinkit was very funny.But kind of cruel. I was really shocked when a lot of people died.but I think ending part was kind of bad. because only few people survived. it was poor of them. I think I would be so afraid and die. I think fire fighters are really dangerous job. They are realy working to die. When I saw fire captain sarificing, I was about to cry. I think that fire captain is really working hard and one of the best. If he was not there, everyone who were in the building would die including two firefighters. It was really impressive. and I played some games, and I won a lot of times. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-01-02 답변내용 Today wa New year's day and I feel seriously good. Today [is] New [Year's Day] and I [seriouslly feel] good. I played a lot. [Correct!] First, I watched a movie named Tower. [Correct!] It was really funny. [Correct!] I thinkit was very funny. But kind of cruel. I [think it/ was very [funny, but] kind of cruel. I was really shocked when a lot of people died. [Correct!] but I think ending part was kind of bad. [But] I think [the] ending part was kind of bad. because only few people survived. [Because only a] few people survived. it was poor of them. [They were pitiful.] I think I would be so afraid and die. I think I would be so afraid and [I might] die. I think fire fighters are really dangerous job. I think [being a firefighter is] really [a] dangerous job. They are realy working to die. They [might die while working.] When I saw fire captain sarificing, I was about to cry. When I saw [the] fire captain [sacrificing his life,] I was about to cry. I think that fire captain is really working hard and one of the best. I think that fire captain [was] really working hard and one of the best. If he was not there, everyone who were in the building would die including two firefighters. If he was not there, everyone who [was] in the building would die including [the] two firefighters. It was really impressive. [Correct!] and I played some games, and I won a lot of times. [And] I played some games [and] I won a lot of times. Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 3. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. Hi Stiven! It's good to hear that you had fun last New Year's Day. I saw the trailer of that movie two weeks ago and I liked it. I hope I could watch that movie too. Happy New Year, Stiven! ^^ - Teacher Tracy