1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-01-03 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 so cold 내 용 Today was so cold that I hated it. It was really horrible. I could almost die by wind. The wind was horrifying. I really hate cold weather, because, it is so irritating. According to the news, Seoul's lowest temparature was -16, I thougt My ears and face will be frozen. My mother and sister wore 2 coats. I was very surprised. I didn't know tjat it would be that cold. i was very surprised. I hope this cold will disappear quickly. I hope thre won't be any cold weather any more. I seriously hate it. I hope I can make one of the warmest coat in the world. and I think it's good thing that it is good to ride a ski and sled in the park. When it snows, I can use there as a sled park! 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-01-04 답변내용 Today was so cold that I hated it. [Correct!] It was really horrible. [Correct!] I could almost die by wind. I [almost died because of the] wind. The wind was horrifying. [Correct!] I really hate cold weather, because, it is so irritating. I really hate cold [weather because] it is so irritating. According to the news, Seoul's lowest temparature was -16, According to the news, Seoul's lowest temparature was [-16 degrees Celsius.] I thougt My ears and face will be frozen. I thougt [my] ears and face [would] be frozen. My mother and sister wore 2 coats. [Correct!] I was very surprised. [Correct!] I didn't know tjat it would be that cold. I didn't know [that] it would be that cold. i was very surprised. [i] was very surprised. I hope this cold will disappear quickly. [Correct!] I hope thre won't be any cold weather any more. I hope [there] won't be any cold weather [anymore.] I seriously hate it. [Correct!] I hope I can make one of the warmest coat in the world. I hope I can make one of the warmest [coats] in the world. and I think it's good thing that it is good to ride a ski and sled in the park. [I] think it's [good to wear it when you go skiing and sledding at] the park. When it snows, I can use there as a sled park! When it snows, I can use [it when I go sledding at the] park! When it snows, I can use there as a sled park! Notes: 1. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 2. Be careful with your spelling. Hi Stiven! I guess you're not enjoying winter. Here in the Philippines, it feels like summer today. It's sunny most of the time. By the way, your sentences are improving! Keep up the good work! ^^ - Teacher Tracy