1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-01-04 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Going School 내 용 I went to school today. I had to clean, but I didn't. So teacher called my mom and she told every fault that I did. I was kind of playing and I was caught by teacher.I was ordered to clean the hall. and I just cleaned and played and go home, but the problem was that I didn't get check. Teacher tought I didn't clean. and She finally told everything that I did during my 2nd semester. But the thing is that I was kind of terrible in that time. and she even exaggerated it. I seriously hate her. I hope she disappears in the world. Seiously, I want to urse her to die. I really hate her. One time I suspected she being a teacher. I think I was also terrible, but every my classmate will agree that I was much better than her. 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-01-07 답변내용 I went to school today. [Correct!] I had to clean, but I didn't. I had to clean [the hall,] but I didn't. So teacher called my mom and she told every fault that I did. So [my] teacher called my mom and she told [her] every [mistake] that I did. I was kind of playing and I was caught by teacher. I was [playing] and I was caught by [my] teacher. I was ordered to clean the hall. [Correct!] and I just cleaned and played and go home, but the problem was that I didn't get check. [So] I [cleaned,] played and [went home. But] the problem was that [she] didn't [check on me.] Teacher tought I didn't clean. [My teacher thought] I didn't clean. and She finally told everything that I did during my 2nd semester. [So she] finally told [my mom] everything that I did [in the second] semester. But the thing is that I was kind of terrible in that time. But the thing is that I was kind of terrible [at] that time. and she even exaggerated it. [And] she even exaggerated it. I seriously hate her. [Correct!] I hope she disappears in the world. [Correct!] Seiously, I want to urse her to die. [Seriously,] I want to [curse] her to die. I really hate her. [Correct!] One time I suspected she being a teacher. One [time,] I [doubt her skill of] being a teacher. I think I was also terrible, but every my classmate will agree that I was much better than her. I think I was also terrible, but [each of] my [classmates] will agree that I [am] much better than her. Notes: 1. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. 2. Be careful with your spelling. 3. Please focus on the proper use of pronouns. Hi Stiven! I think your teacher also did a mistake. But don't think of bad things to happen to her. Be more patient and remember that she's older than you. And most importantly, she's your teacher. So you have to respect her all the time. Just try not to commit mistakes again next time. So she won't have anything to tell your mom. ^^ Cheer up, Stiven! ^.~ - Teacher Tracy