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2013-01-09
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Today was extremely cold. I needed to walk to math academy. It was cold because of widny weather, but, My mother didn't took me to the academy, because she is mad at me. I don't think she will bring me to the academy. It actually took about 5 minutes but it is now taking about 23~30 minutes. It's annoying to walk and walk.and Because of going Pc room, I can't geta pocket money. I'm sad about it. I was kind of late for academy and blamed. I didn't know that my mother's driving was this much comfortant
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Today was extremely cold. [Correct!] I needed to walk to math academy. [Correct!] It was cold because of widny weather, but, It was cold because of My mother didn't took me to the academy, because she is mad at me. My mother didn't [take] me to the [academy because] she is mad at me. I don't think she will bring me to the academy. I don't think she will [drive] me to the academy. It actually took about 5 minutes but it is now taking about 23~30 minutes. It [only takes] about 5 minutes [by car,] but it is now taking [me 23-30] minutes [to get there.] It's annoying to walk and walk. [Correct!] and Because of going Pc room, I can't geta pocket money. [And because] of going [to the PC] room, I can't [get] pocket money. I'm sad about it. [Correct!] I was kind of late for academy and blamed. I was kind of late for academy and [I was the one to blame.] I didn't know that my mother's driving was this much comfortant I didn't know that [driving to the academy] was that convenient. Note: 1. Use proper punctuation mark for your sentences. 2. Observe proper word choices. Hi Stiven! I'm sorry to hear about what happened to you. I hope you're now in good terms with your mom. But if you still have to go the academy on foot, leave your house early so you won't be late again. - Teacher Tracy