1 LOL event match 2014-04-01 2 Soccer game 2014-03-25 3 Soccer game 2014-03-25 4 Soccer game 2014-03-25 5 Soccer game 2014-03-25 6 Soccer game 2014-03-25 7 Soccer game 2014-03-25 8 Soccer game 2014-03-25 9 LOL Chamionship 2014-03-17 10 Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken 2014-02-21 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 한예호 작성일 2013-01-20 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 A step from heaven 내 용 Young ju is kind of a poor girl. I don't like her father that much. Because he hits their children very much. I'm not fond of him. I think he is not kind of poorbut in this stoy Young ju is saying that her father is poor. Whatever. She is very dilligent girl who studies alot, and hard. but get hit by her father because of making a friend with American girl Amanda. Her day was kind of pain. Her father saw young ju studying with Amanda and he hit her seriously a lot. but, when her mother tried to stop, he just hit her mother. She seiously got hurt, and she alled to police b saying my fatheris trying to kill mom. Her mother had to surgery, but didn't complain about him to police. I found that she loved her husband 답변자 Addie 답변일 2013-01-21 답변내용 Young ju is kind of a poor girl. Young [Ju is a] poor girl. I don't like her father that much. [Correct!] Because he hits their children very much. Because he hits [his] children [a lot.] I'm not fond of him. [Correct!] I think he is not kind of poorbut in this stoy Young ju is saying that her father is poor. I think he is not [poor] in this stoy. [but] Young [Ju] is saying that her father is poor. Whatever. [Correct!] She is very dilligent girl who studies alot, and hard. She is [a] very dilligent girl who studies [hard.] but get hit by her father because of making a friend with American girl Amanda. [But her father hits her] because of [being friends] with [an] American girl [named] Amanda. Her day was kind of pain. [She had painful days.] Her father saw young ju studying with Amanda and he hit her seriously a lot. Her father saw [her] studying with Amanda and he hit her [a lot.] but, when her mother tried to stop, he just hit her mother. [But] when her mother tried to stop [her father], he just hit her mother. She seiously got hurt, and she alled to police b saying my fatheris trying to kill mom. She [seriously] got [hurt, so] she [called] to police [saying, "My father is trying to kill my mom."] Her mother had to surgery, but didn't complain about him to police. Her mother had to [undergo a] surgery, but didn't complain about him to [the] police. I found that she loved her husband I [learned] that she [loves] her husband [very much.] Notes: 1. Be careful with your spelling. 2. Please use proper punctuation mark for your sentences. Hi Stiven! Thank you for sharing this story! I'm sure your dad is better than Young Ju's. :) And I hope that you'll be a good father in the future. ^^ - Teacher Tracy