1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-20 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 My little brother's playhouse 내 용 My little brother have a playhouse.His playhouse is under the my desk.Tomorrow I'll gave candy,bubble gum and post for him.He like candy and gums.He readbooks.Sometime,he play with toys.It look so funny.I covered bedquilt on the room floor,put the perfume,gave sweets and talk about playhouse moveing.Brother's playhouse is cozy,warm and comfortable.His house is nice place.I think my bed is good place,too!Tomorrow,my brother's playhouse moving on my bed.Now,moving his toy car,robot,money bag,cards and plastic box.His robot's nameis Tobot,and his toycar's names are car1,2,3,4........Sometimes,he so greedy.But somtimes, he is so~~lovely.I love my little brother.*^^* 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-24 답변내용 Corrections: My little brother have a playhouse. ✔ My little brother had a playhouse. His playhouse is under the my desk. = Correct Sentence / His playhouse was under my desk. Tomorrow I'll gave candy,bubble gum and post for him. ✔ Tomorrow, I'll give him a candy, bubble gum and a post. He like candy and gums. ✔ He likes candy and gums. He readbooks. ✔ He read books. Sometime,he play with toys. ✔ Sometimes, he played with his toys. It look so funny. ✔ He looked so funny. I covered bedquilt on the room floor,put the perfume,gave sweets and talk about playhouse moveing. ✔ I covered the room with the quilt, put perfume, gave sweets and talked about moving the playhouse. Brother's playhouse is cozy,warm and comfortable. ✔ My brother's playhouse was cozy, warm and comfortable. His house is nice place. ✔ His little house was a nice place. I think my bed is good place,too! ✔ I think my bed was a good place, too! Tomorrow,my brother's playhouse moving on my bed. ✔ Tomorrow, my brother's playhouse will be moved near my bed. Now,moving his toy car,robot,money bag,cards and plastic box. ✔ I already moved his toy car, robot, money bag, cards and plastic box. His robot's nameis Tobot,and his toycar's names are car1,2,3,4........ ✔ His robot's name was Tobot and his toy car names were car 1,2,3,4 and so on. Sometimes,he so greedy. But somtimes, he is so~~lovely. ✔ He's so greedy and lovely at times. I love my little brother.*^^* = Correct Sentence Grammar Comments: 1. Always use past tensen if the action is done in the past. 2. Please use space to separate successive words. 3. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. Message: Hi Esther, I guess you really have a lovely brother. ◕‿◕❤