1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-21 Weather    Feeling  Pleasure 제 목 Thea stilton 내 용 I like Thea and her friends. Thea and her frinds:Thea/home:U.S.A. Violet/home:China Paulina/home:Peru Nicky/home:Australia Colette/home:france Panela/home:Tanzania.I like them so~~much. Nic look a cut,colette look a beauty,Vi look a sweet,polly look a smart and Pam look a brave.They are perfect friends.I can see tham,I'll so happy.I think Thea better than Geronimo.Because Thea is pretty girl.But other girls have hairs Thea don't have hair.Why..why..why Thea don't have hair???I'm so sad. But Thea sweetest mouse in the world. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-24 답변내용 Corrections: I like Thea and her friends. = Correct Sentence Thea and her frinds:Thea/home:U.S.A. Violet/home:China Paulina/home:Peru Nicky/home:Australia Colette/home:france Panela/home:Tanzania. ✔ In the story Thea and her friends, the cast were Thea from U.S.A., Violet from China, Paulina from Peru, Nicky from Australia, Colette from France and Pamela from Tanzania. I like them so~~much. ✔ I like them so much. Nic look a cut,colette look a beauty,Vi look a sweet,polly look a smart and Pam look a brave. ✔ Nicky looked cute, Colette was beautiful, Violet looked sweet, Paulina looked smart and Pamela looked brave. They are perfect friends. ✔ They are perfect to be friends. I can see tham,I'll so happy. ✔ Whenever I see them, I feel so happy. I think Thea better than Geronimo. ✔ I think Thea is better than Geronimo. Because Thea is pretty girl. ✔ It's because Thea is a pretty girl. But other girls have hairs Thea don't have hair. ✔ Thea didn't have hair but the other girls have it. Why..why..why Thea don't have hair???I'm so sad. ✔ I wonder why she doensn't have hair. ✔ I felt sad about it. But Thea sweetest mouse in the world. ✔ Thea was the sweetest mouse in the world. Grammar Comments: 1. Please capitalize the name of a person, animal or thing. 2. Please avoid shortcuts. Always make a complete sentence. 3. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. Message: Hi Esther, Wow! I'm not familiar with the story. ◕‿◕❤