1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-22 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Dork diaryes^^ 내 용 To.Nickki. Hi,Nickki.I'm Esther and your big fan.I think..you look so sweet.But you look contrified,too! I don't like Mackenzie.But she look like a fashion fairy. She so mean.(That's why I don't like Mackenzie.)I think untie hair better than tie hair.You wear cute hairlace,ear ring and necklace.You draw eyeline on your eye.You better then Mac.Brandon really is your boy friend? Bradon and you so~~~~good couple. GOOD LUCK NICKKI. love, Esther 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-24 답변내용 Corrections: To.Nickki. Hi,Nickki.I'm Esther and your big fan. ✔ To: Nicky / Nickki Hi Nicky! I'm Esther, your big fan. I think..you look so sweet. ✔ I think you look so sweet. But you look contrified,too! ✔ You look countrified too. I don't like Mackenzie. = Correct Sentence But she look like a fashion fairy. ✔ She looks like a fashionable fairy. She so mean.(That's why I don't like Mackenzie.) ✔ She's so mean that's why I don't like her. I think untie hair better than tie hair. ✔ I think untying your hair is better than tying it. You wear cute hairlace,ear ring and necklace. ✔ The hair lace, earrings and necklace look cute on you. You draw eyeline on your eye. ✔ You put an eyeliner under your eyes. You better then Mac. ✔ You look better than Mac. Brandon really is your boy friend? ✔ Is Brandon really your boyfriend? Bradon and you so~~~~good couple. ✔ You and Brandon look so good together. GOOD LUCK NICKKI. love, Esther ✔ Good Luck Nickki! Love, Esther Grammar Comments: 1. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. 2. Please check the spelling of words. Message: Hi Esther, Haha! Who is Nickki? ◕‿◕❤