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I want more time
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Be thankful for all i've got now
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my own credit card
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After the field trip
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Field trip
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I think I'm Henry's foe.I know how I attack him.Firstly,I gather club members. Scondly,prepared oil,black pepper,eggs,ice,mustad,ketchup,cut the branch,toothpick,long plastic stick and coarse salt.Lastly,we'll sprinkle black pepper,egg,ice and oil.Then,We'll attack henry with our weapon. Highlight!! We'll mix mustad,ketchup and water then he drink it. I think it's perfect idea!!
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2013-01-24
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Corrections: I think I'm Henry's foe. = Correct Sentence I know how I attack him. ✔ I know how to attack him. Firstly,I gather club members. ✔ Firstly, I will gather the members of the club. Scondly,prepared oil,black pepper,eggs,ice,mustad,ketchup,cut the branch,toothpick,long plastic stick and coarse salt. ✔ Secondly, prepare oil, black pepper, eggs, ice, mustard, ketchup, toothpick, long plastic stick and coarse salt. Lastly,we'll sprinkle black pepper,egg,ice and oil. ✔ Lastly, we'll sprinkle black pepper, egg, ice and oil. Then,We'll attack henry with our weapon. ✔ Then, it's done. ✔ We'll attack Henry with our weapon. Highlight!! We'll mix mustad,ketchup and water then he drink it. ✔ The highlight of my experiment is mixing the mustard, ketchup and water as his drink. I think it's perfect idea!! ✔ I think it's a perfect idea! Grammar Comments: 1. Please make sure to put space to separate successive words in writing. 2. Always capitalize the name of a person. 3. Please put a preposition. Message: Hi Esther, Wow! It's quite interesting. ◕‿◕❤