1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-24 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 My cooking recipe^^ 내 용 I like egg bread.Egg bread my mom invention.It so delicious.Egg bread's recipe is secret.But my mouse is tickle.I olny teach you prepare things.You prepared egg,bread.And **** them together.**** is quiz.It so easy quiz.I like bread.Specially my mom's egg bread.Miss Jenny,you can visit my home,I can cooking egg bread.Sometimes,I want to be a baker.Because I like cook! 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-25 답변내용 Corrections: I like egg bread. = Correct Sentence Egg bread my mom invention. ✔ Egg bread is my mom's invention. It so delicious. = It's so delicious. Egg bread's recipe is secret. ✔ The egg bread's recipe is a secret. But my mouse is tickle. ✔ My mouth tickled. / I got a watery mouth now. I olny teach you prepare things. ✔ I'll teach you to prepare things. You prepared egg,bread. ✔ You have to prepare an egg and bread. And **** them together.**** is quiz. ✔ I'll let you guess the other ingredient ofit. It so easy quiz. ✔ It's an easy quiz. I like bread. = Correct Sentence Specially my mom's egg bread. ✔ Especially my mom's egg bread. Miss Jenny,you can visit my home,I can cooking egg bread. ✔ Miss Jenny, you can visit my home and I will cook an egg bread. Sometimes,I want to be a baker.Because I like cook! ✔ I sometimes wanted to become a baker because I like to cook! Grammar Comments: 1. Please don't forget to use a verb in your sentence. 2. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. Message: Hi Esther, Wow! Are you talking about an egg sandwich? I love egg sandwich. The ingredients are egg, mayonnaise, and cheese. ◕‿◕❤