1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-25 Weather    Feeling  Satisfaction 제 목 Cold,cold,cold!! 내 용 Today is so cold.I wear my padding,gloves,underwear and boots but I'm so cold too!I think I become ice. In side is cold too.And now I wear my mom's vest it's so warm.I want become summer fast.I don't like summer too but summer better then winter.My favorite seasons are spring and fall.Spring is warm and fall is cool.I want spring comming fast! 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-25 답변내용 Corrections: Today is so cold. ✔ It's so cold today. I wear my padding,gloves,underwear and boots but I'm so cold too!I think I become ice. ✔ I wore paddings, gloves, underwear and boots but still I felt cold. ✔ I'm freezing like an ice. In side is cold too. ✔ It's also cold inside. And now I wear my mom's vest it's so warm. ✔ Now, I wore my mom's vest and it's so warm. I want become summer fast. ✔ I want it to be summer. I don't like summer too but summer better then winter. ✔ I don't like summer but it's better than winter. My favorite seasons are spring and fall. = Correct Sentence Spring is warm and fall is cool. ✔ It's warm in spring and cold in fall season. I want spring comming fast! ✔ I wanted it to spring now. Grammar Comments: 1. Please use past tense if th action is done in the past. 2. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. Message: Hi Esther, I love cold! Haha! ◕‿◕❤