1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-01-30 Weather    Feeling  Tired 제 목 Paper work!! 내 용 Today,I'm doing make origami with my mom and yonger brother.It so funny but it so hard,too.I made two cranes.It is so hard work I ever seen in the origami.My friend made thousand cranes.I see.Many friends are origami genius in my class.They can make piano,desk and even drawer. Some times I'm marvel ther merit.Ther merit are so funtastic!! I want learn ther marvel. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-01-31 답변내용 Corrections: Today,I'm doing make origami with my mom and yonger brother. ✔ Today,I'm doing an origami with my mom and yonger brother. It so funny but it so hard,too. ✔ It's funny but it's difficult, too. I made two cranes. = Correct Sentence It is so hard work I ever seen in the origami. ✔ It's the hard work, I have ever seen. My friend made thousand cranes. ✔ My friend made thousands of cranes. I see.Many friends are origami genius in my class. ✔ I could see a lot of friends making origamis in my class. ✔ They're genius in makit it. They can make piano,desk and even drawer. ✔ They could make a piano, desk and even a drawer. Some times I'm marvel ther merit. ✔ I sometimes marvel with them. Ther merit are so funtastic!! ✔ They're fantastic I want learn ther marvel. ✔ I wanted to be like them.