1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-03 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 Grandma's Kimchi! 내 용 Today,my grandma made Kimchi it so delicous.Grandma is best cook in my home.Her food's taste are kingdom of Heaven taste and surprise taste.I like them very much!It isn't spicy and isn't salty.You don't eat my grandma's Kimchi,you do not know this teste.I hope you can visit my home.Because I give grandma's Kimchi for you.I like food.Specially grandma's food! P.S.Have a nice day,Miss Jenny and see you tomorrow.^^ 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-05 답변내용 Correction: Today,my grandma made Kimchi it so delicous. ✔ Today, my grandma made Kimchi and it's so delicious. Grandma is best cook in my home. ✔ My grandma cooked best inmy home. Her food's taste are kingdom of Heaven taste and surprise taste. ✔ Her homemade food tasted like the kingdom of heaven. ✔ It very surprising. I like them very much! = Correct Sentence / I like it very much. It isn't spicy and isn't salty. ✔ It isn't spicy and salty. You don't eat my grandma's Kimchi,you do not know this teste. ✔ If you don't eat my grandma's Kimchi, you'll not know the taste of it. I hope you can visit my home. = Correct Sentence Because I give grandma's Kimchi for you. ✔ I could give grandma's Kimhi for you. I like food. = Correct Sentence Specially grandma's food! ✔ My grandma's food specialty! Grammar Comments: 1. Always make a complete sentene. 2. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. Message: Hi Esther, Wow! I guess you grandma's cooking is really good. ◕‿◕❤