1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-05 Weather    Feeling  Gratitude 제 목 Fantasy!! 내 용 I like fantasy.Because fantasy storys are so fun,interesting and exciting.My favorite fantasy book's name is Geronimo's fantasy adventure.The characters are Geronimo,Alice,Rovru,Alkiera,Poos in boots,Kladovia and Titan.These series are so fantastic.Geronimo have a lot of prize.Today I lend three books at my school.The all books names are same.Books names are Geronimo!These books are so heavy.I'm so hard because I carryed them.Geronimo's popularitys are so great!I hope I can meet Geronimo's author.I want take his sigh. 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-07 답변내용 Corrections: I like fantasy. = Correct Sentence Because fantasy storys are so fun,interesting and exciting. ✔ Fantasy stories are so fun, interesting and exciting. My favorite fantasy book's name is Geronimo's fantasy adventure. ✔ My favorite fantasy book is Geronimo's fantasy adventure. The characters are Geronimo,Alice,Rovru,Alkiera,Poos in boots,Kladovia and Titan. ✔ The characters are Geronimo, Alice, Rovru, Alkiera, Puss in boots, Kladovia and Titan. These series are so fantastic. = Correct Sentence Geronimo have a lot of prize. ✔ Geronimo have a lot of prizes. Today I lend three books at my school. ✔ Today, I lend three books in my school. The all books names are same. ✔ All of the books are the same. Books names are Geronimo! = Correct These books are so heavy. ✔ The books are so heavy. I'm so hard because I carryed them. ✔ It's difficult to carry them. Geronimo's popularitys are so great! ✔ Geronimo's popularity is so great! I hope I can meet Geronimo's author. = Correct Sentence / I hope I can meet the author of the Geronimo's books. I want take his sigh. ✔ I want to take his autograph. Grammar Comments: 1. Please double check the spelling of words. 2. Vocabulary enhancement is in need. 3. Please put a comma (,) to indicate the separation of elements within the grammatical structure of a sentence. Message: Esther, Hi! Good job! Keep reading the books. ◕‿◕❤