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My dream is to be a reporter. If I become a reporter, I think I would try hard to become the best reporter in the world. I think it would be really good if i be a reproter like a park Dae gi in korea. A lot of people will make parody about me. It would be seriously great. I hope that I can achieve my dream. I think I really can do it well. I hope to be a great reporter. I think reprter is not that hard job. Maybe I just need to graduate from any other school. and enter any other comapny and be kind of famous and go to SBS,KBS,MBC. and tell to people about the news, maybe I can be a anker too. I think I can be a rich and have a bright life. I can also dream about the dramati life which I'am going to experience. I would be really happy.
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My dream is to be a reporter. [Correct!] If I become a reporter, I think I would try hard to become the best reporter in the world. [Correct!] I think it would be really good if i be a reproter like a park Dae gi in korea. I think it would be really good if [I could] be a reporter [like Park Dae Gi] in [Korea.] A lot of people will make parody about me. A lot of people will make [a] parody [of] me. It would be seriously great. [Correct!] I hope that I can achieve my dream. [Correct!] I think I really can do it well. I think I [can really] do [well] I hope to be a great reporter. [Correct!] I think reprter is not that hard job. I think [being a reporter] is not [a] hard job. Maybe I just need to graduate from any other school. and enter any other comapny and be kind of famous and go to SBS,KBS,MBC. and tell to people about the news, Maybe I just need to graduate from any [school, enter any company and be famous. I can go to SBS,KBS or MBC and report news to people.] maybe I can be a anker too. [Maybe] I can be [an anchor] too. I think I can be a rich and have a bright life. I think I can [be rich] and have a bright life. I can also dream about the dramati life which I'am going to experience. I can also dream about the [dramatic] life [I'm] going to experience. I would be really happy. [Correct!] Notes: 1. Please be careful with your spelling. 2. Please use proper punctuation marks for your sentences. 3. Any word that comes at the beginning of the sentence is capitalized. Hi Stiven! Thank you so much for sharing your dream! I hope you'll become a successful reporter in the future. Just keep studying and working hard to achieve your dream. ^^ - Teacher Tracy