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Debate competition
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start of the week
2019-04-08
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cold and caugh
2019-04-05
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planning to make a new club
2019-03-25
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concerning
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I want more time
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my own credit card
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After the field trip
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Field trip
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2013-02-08
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Tomorrow,my family and I go to the Ⱦ¼º.We'll stay in condo and we'll go hot spring.I think I'll going to PC bang,and I'll study English.I'll saw a English vidio,read English books and Korean books and I 'll play so funny.I can't wait tomorrow.My dad prepare iPad for tomorrow.Maybe..I think..he'll play games at our place.We have many games in iPad.We pack our things.Our clothes,digital things and snacks.I'm so happy.Because I wasn't think I 'll go to travel.I hope I'll stay there happy.
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Corrections: Tomorrow,my family and I go to the Ⱦ¼º. ✔ Tomorrow,my family and I will go to the Ⱦ¼º. We'll stay in condo and we'll go hot spring. ✔ We'll stay in condo and we'll go to the hot spring. I think I'll going to PC bang,and I'll study English. ✔ I think I'll go to the computer shop anf\d I'll study Englisg. I'll saw a English vidio,read English books and Korean books and I 'll play so funny. ✔ I saw an English video, read English and Korean e-books and played. I can't wait tomorrow. ✔ I can't wait for tomorrow. My dad prepare iPad for tomorrow. ✔ My dad prepared the iPad for tomorrow's event. Maybe..I think..he'll play games at our place. ✔ Maybe, I think he'll play games in our place. We have many games in iPad. = Correct Sentence We pack our things. Our clothes,digital things and snacks. ✔ We packed our clothes, gadgets and snacks. I'm so happy. = Correct Sentence Because I wasn't think I 'll go to travel. ✔ I wan't thinking of travelling. I hope I'll stay there happy. ✔ I hope to stay there happily.