1 Debate competition 2019-04-12 2 start of the week 2019-04-08 3 cold and caugh 2019-04-05 4 planning to make a new club 2019-03-25 5 concerning 2019-03-14 6 I want more time 2019-03-08 7 Be thankful for all i've got now 2018-08-03 8 my own credit card 2018-07-31 9 After the field trip 2017-05-17 10 Field trip 2017-05-16 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 [다음10개]   회 원 임세빈 작성일 2013-02-13 Weather    Feeling  As usua 제 목 today... 내 용 After 2 days is the spring vacation.I and my classmate must take my things.Things are so heavy.Today,my mom went school for me.She take away my things and she bought pork cutlet,Gimbap,noodle and vegetables.Pork cutlet is so delicious. I saw Ice age 3.So funny.I saw movie with olny English!! Ah! I ate freeze persimmon.So cool but persimmon's skin is little hard.Anyway,today is good day too! 답변자 tc0010 답변일 2013-02-15 답변내용 Corrections: After 2 days is the spring vacation. ✔ Two more days and it'll be spring vacation. I and my classmate must take my things. ✔ My classmate and I must do many things. Things are so heavy. ✔ The things are so heavy. Today,my mom went school for me. ✔ Today, my mom went to school for me. She take away my things and she bought pork cutlet,Gimbap,noodle and vegetables. ✔ She took many things and bought the pork cutlet, gimbap, noodles and vegetables. Pork cutlet is so delicious. = Correct Sentence I saw Ice age 3.So funny. ✔ I saw the Ice age 3 and it's funny. I saw movie with olny English!! ✔ I saw it in my English class! Ah! I ate freeze persimmon. ✔ I ate frozen persimmon. So cool but persimmon's skin is little hard. ✔ It's so cool but the persimmon's skin was a little hard. Anyway,today is good day too! ✔ Anyway, today is a good day!