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LOL Chamionship
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Queen's Gold Medal Being Taken
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I think game might be good or not be good. I think game has some good things, such as solving the stress, and have something to talk with my friends. However it has something really bad. We spend too much time with it. I think it might be good. I think being too addictive to game is much better. I found it much more interesting. However, my mom really hates it. I don't know why but I think it is kind of strange. I sometimes don't understand mom. If I go to PC room or any where my friends play, my mom always scream at me. I really hate it. I think it is kind of strange. so I always go secretly or play game in home. I hope my mother will someday give me free
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I think game might be good or not be good. I think [games can] be good [and bad.] I think game has some good things, such as solving the stress, and have something to talk with my friends. I think [we can get] some good things [from games] such as [relieving] stress and [having] something to talk [about] with my friends. However it has something really bad. [However,] it has [bad effects, too.] We spend too much time with it. [Correct!] I think it might be good. [But] I think it [is] good. I think being too addictive to game is much better. I think being too addictive to [games] is much better. I found it much more interesting. I [find] it much more interesting. However, my mom really hates it. [Correct!] I don't know why but I think it is kind of strange. I don't know [why,] but I think it is kind of strange. I sometimes don't understand mom. I sometimes don't understand [my] mom. If I go to PC room or any where my friends play, my mom always scream at me. If I go to [the] PC room or [anywhere] my friends play, my mom always [yells] at me. I really hate it. [Correct!] I think it is kind of strange. [Correct!] so I always go secretly or play game in home. [So] I always go secretly or play [games at] home. I hope my mother will someday give me free I hope my mother will [give me freedom someday.] Notes: 1. Please study more on different sentence patterns and grammatical structures. 2. Please observe proper word choices. Hi Stiven! I beg to disagree with what you said about being addicted to games. Playing games is good. But being addicted to it will never be good. Your mom doesn't want you to get addicted to games because she knows that once you get addicted to it, your studies will be affected. Your mom will surely give you freedom in the future. It might take some time but it is your mom's responsiblity to take care of you. So just understand your mom, Stiven. Always follow her and remember that mothers know best. Cheer up! ^^ - Teacher Tracy